Shark Tank Reflection

For my formal proposal and Shark Tank presentation, I feel like I used most of the same techniques that I normally do. I wrote the formal proposal in one sitting and then continued to come back to it and make corrections until I felt like it was the best that it could be. For my Shark Tank presentation I only included visuals that represented the main points that were made in my proposal. I started with a little bit of background about the hospital, which I felt wasn't the most exciting introduction, but that is something that I could work on. Secondly, I used pictures of the building and the logos for the organizations that it is involved with. I felt this was probably the best part of my presentation. Lastly, I felt like my conclusion during the presentation was weak and I could have been more persuasive. Overall, I think that my formal proposal was better than my Shark Tank presentation because I included a more persuasive argument in the proposal and I think I may have shortened my presentation too much. I definitely think one of my strengths was providing information about the hospital and reasons why I felt it was worthy of further research in my formal proposal. A weakness of mine was probably going too quickly through my Shark Tank presentation and not making it extremely interesting or elaborating on the points I had to make about my topic. For the next main project I will spend more time working on a more interesting introduction and a stronger conclusion.